Lois,
some good work produced to date and it is good to see that a majority of the layouts and styling aspects for the 3 products are in place.
Your work does need to be a bit more dynamic - more impact with fonts, more interesting with layouts, don't be afraid to 'borrow' stylistic design traits from existing products and utilise / develop these in your own work.
You have all the images that you need now - a bit more research to help you to develop the work and you can bring your work into the higher grade boundaries.
Carl.
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